FIRST DRAFT FEEDBACK
At this point in our editing stage, we believe even though our thriller isn't completely finished, we can still show it to our audience and ask them their views on it.
"It would be more professional if a BBFC certificate was shown at the start"
"The text on the screen is difficult to read in that colour font"
"The clip of the detective walking into the classroom is too long"
"Take out the word 'starring' before the actors name"
Hopefully this gives you an insight of some of the constructive criticism we received, I wanted to share this with you to keep you on the ball with our editing process and what we'll now be changing.
"It would be more professional if a BBFC certificate was shown at the start"
"The text on the screen is difficult to read in that colour font"
"The clip of the detective walking into the classroom is too long"
"Take out the word 'starring' before the actors name"
Hopefully this gives you an insight of some of the constructive criticism we received, I wanted to share this with you to keep you on the ball with our editing process and what we'll now be changing.
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